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(中吕)阳春曲.七夕

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1 (中吕)阳春曲.七夕 on Mon 16 Aug 2010 - 23:21

翔鹰


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多情自古空余恨,

好梦回时冷透衾.

鹊桥难搭年年见,

人间共庆今宵圆.

闷愁山重海样深.

独自过,

秋雨冷吾心.


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2 Re: (中吕)阳春曲.七夕 on Tue 17 Aug 2010 - 19:49

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掺杂有前人句,可属引用?是否多了句式,管见!

3 Re: (中吕)阳春曲.七夕 on Wed 18 Aug 2010 - 14:56

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引用前人有两句,好梦回时冷透衾,闷愁山重海样深.


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