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七绝 闻垫江遭灾

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1 七绝 闻垫江遭灾 on Fri 7 May 2010 - 0:06

枣山人

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青海颓垣未及收,
垫江风暴又摧蹂。
我心总系灾区屋,
坍塌无校舍楼?

 

2 Re: 七绝 闻垫江遭灾 on Fri 7 May 2010 - 12:11

鳌溪闲客

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关注民生,心系灾区。叹赏!
尾句孤平?


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3 Re: 七绝 闻垫江遭灾 on Sat 8 May 2010 - 23:02

枣山人

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谢鳌板,末句孤平未能救,祈指教。



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4 Re: 七绝 闻垫江遭灾 on Tue 11 May 2010 - 12:41

玄键


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我心总系灾区屋,
坍塌无校舍楼?

情系学子,向您致敬!

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